What it was like : the Christchurch earthquake
Sitting at the table alone I feel it rattle , I carelessly ignore this sign but I know I shouldn’t have.As bricks start to fall in the distance I take a glimpse out the window. Everyone was running and sirens were wailing. I turn around and thought to run through the open door but as I am running towards the door bricks and dust fall and block my only exit.
I’m trapped , I know I can’t get out. All of a sudden a light bulb falls from the ceiling and crashes next to me. I think if I will ever be found. I freeze. Then I can’t see anything. It is as black as the nights sky.
My eyes flutter open and I see that I’m in a room. The floor is covered with kids junk including clothing,teddies, and books. I notice that I am in my room. My parents are on the side of my bed wiping the sweat off my face and reassuring me that everything is okay.
I realise it was just a nightmare and it is all over.
I love your writing Sarah. You've used correct tense and language features. Well Done!!!
ReplyDeleteI love your writing Sarah. You've used correct tense and language features. Well Done!!!
ReplyDeleteYour writing is awesome I like it alot
ReplyDeleteReflection
ReplyDeleteThis story is mainly based around the Christchurch earthquake in February.In my writing I tried to use correct tense and I think I did pretty well.