Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 12 October 2016

Flynn speech

Hi my name is Flynn and I got my speech into the HARNESSED magazine and i talked about Dexter Dunn, who is a famous driver.   I was in the speech final and Mrs M helped me to put  my speech  in the harnessed magazine.  I was really happy. I did not no this was happening.  It was a big surprise!



Wednesday, 29 June 2016

Etu's Superhero ME!

For Literacy we have been learning to paint a picutre in the readers head by using descriptive language. We invented our own Superhero and created a Fotobabble to share our story.
I hope you enjoy it!


Wednesday, 8 June 2016

Click,click, smash, bang

Click, click, click, my work buddies and I type on our sweaty,  greasy keyboards. Rattle, crack, shake, smash. Suddenly my computer falls then the building goes it crumbles with in seconds. All I can here now is faint screams and a groan from close-by. I yell “are you okay?” No response.  Hopefully all it was that he didn't hear me. I yell again this time I hear back “yeah I should be” “are you you stuck under this stone hard frozen brick to?” Yes! Sirens Echo through the the daunted city. I smell smoke there must be a fire in our building, water starts to seep through beneath the rubble where I am hidden, after 5 minuets feet start to crunch up the mountain of rubble he can't here me So I fought and struggle to make movement. The hero called for help. I got out with only a Broken leg and severe bruising.

by josh dunlea

Tuesday, 7 June 2016

My Earthquake Writing




What's happening? I hear people crying in pain and loss. The ground starts shaking under my feet as I scamper down the battered footpath. I see rubble from buildings covering every street. Siren start to wail like a baby crying for their mother. I start to choke on all of the dust in my mouth. I wonder, when will this end...

By Lockie